By Rob N
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Kirby had spent years sketching out characters for the Fourth World, and in his eagerness to showcase them all he was perhaps guilty of throwing too many new concepts at the reader in too short a time. There was barely enough time to digest Character A before Character B appeared the following issue. Within a few months the Fourth World titles began to resemble a fast moving conveyor belt of Kirby weirdness, introducing Big Barda, Dr Bedlam, the Boom Tube, Granny Goodness, Metron and his Mobius Chair, Glorious Godfrey, the Mother Box, Desaad, Mantis, the Deep Six, the Black Racer and many, many more. There was no doubting the power of his imagination, nor the level of his prolific output, but the concepts were disappearing as quickly as they came, to make way for yet more ideas. It seemed to be the comic book equivalent of diarrhoea. Notable amongst the onslaught of new characters was Funky Flashman – a manipulative entrepreneur in a badly fitting wig who bore more than just coincidental resemblance to Stan Lee. Accompanied by his sycophantic assistant House Roy (Roy Thomas), Funky was hardly a flattering take on Kirby’s old partner.
It also became apparent, very early on, that Kirby did not have Stan Lee’s ear for dialogue. If ever the extent of Lee’s contribution to the Sixties Marvel titles was evident, it was in his absence in the writing of the Fourth World titles. Kirby was great at developing bizarre concepts. He was even a decent plot writer. But the pacing of his scripts was questionable, and his dialogue was sadly juvenile at best. Unfortunately for Kirby, his chance at writing coincided with the exact point comics began to ‘grow up’. Comics, more than ever, were beginning to explore social issues of the day (DC in particular was soon to champion ‘relevance’ in comics with titles such as Green Lantern/Green Arrow, a revamped Superman, the gothic take on Batman, and the new look Wonder Woman and Teen Titans), and a fresh influx of young writers, influenced by the liberal philosophies of the hippie movement and by experimental, New Wave SF literature, sought to bring a fresh approach to characterisation. Kirby’s characters however continued to talk as they did in 1963.

The cracks didn’t take long to show. From the very first issue of Jimmy Olsen, Kirby had met with problems. His depiction of Superman didn’t look enough like Superman, according to Carmine Infantino, who insisted that Curt Swan draw facial features over Jack’s basic pencils – a humiliating state of affairs for the most famous comic book artist of the time. By late 1971 Infantino informed Jack that he was to be dropped from the Olsen title, which reverted back to its more traditional stories. A year later, Forever People and New Gods were cancelled prematurely, having barely reached double digits. Mister Miracle remained, but the major elements of the Fourth World saga were shelved (with a vague promise to complete the story at some point) as Jack was ‘encouraged’ to simplify the character into a more straightforward action hero. By 1974, even this title died.

There is a suggestion now that sales on the titles had not actually been as bad as was first thought. Infantino had probably panicked, seeing the drop off from the first few issues (when speculation had inflated sales), but there was also perhaps a feeling at DC that Jack hadn’t delivered material that was commercial enough.
But in the eyes of most people, Kirby was still Kirby, and Kirby was King. Maybe he had been a bit too ambitious? Surely lessons had been learned and his next wave of titles for DC would be the commercial goldmine that they were looking for? This had to be just an unfortunate blip. Kirby was instructed to come up with new concepts. These of course couldn’t possibly fail…
Next up: the declining years at DC - Kamandi, The Demon, OMAC, Sandman and more...
2 comments:
His dialogue may have been clunky at times but Kirby's art still had the power to make your eyeballs burst with sheer unrestrained awesomeness.
I didn't hate the dialogue at all. I do remember feeling a little bit of this:
"There were perhaps too many new ideas; too many new characters, and not enough that remained familiar."
But what did I know? Now I wish that I'd been more broad-minded and willing to soak it all in. I'm glad there are reprints, so that I may read and repent.
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